MattHawkins Online - Film Making Forum

kool, cept i didnt really get why he just saw blood on his hands and died.

yeh, i agree. i didnt mean a lense-flair, i meant just a flash of white light or something to cut to the ash and skull already falling

lol. that just made me burst out laughing, heh heh. sorry, heh...... sorry it just looked like you were trying to be like spiderman or something like that. plus wen you stood on the ball it was obvious that you were holding on to the curtains. i really hope you werent trying to be serious. sorry if ...

aaronv2s thing looked wicked, even tho it has to be some of the poorest quality ever.(not your fault; its the internet's)

hey that was cool, but yeh i agree there should be some sort of lense flair or something and the skull fell a little slow.

yeh, aarons second one was the best one, wish i had after effects. RHYS! HURRY UP AND COME OVER HERE!
by the way, i like your little cartoon aaronv2, did you make it or is it off the internet?

lol, yeh...GOD i cant believe back then we thought they were so awesome, geez we sucked.

i dont know wat i can say, i mean i really cant judge them until you show me an ashing attempt of you or someone with those.
i cant just tell by looking at that still pic sorry.
but if you were goin to try one, i quite like the first one.

that is absolutely wicked. i just typed in for some gun sounds to test it, and it came up with some really good ones. but yeh as Alove said there are some cr** ones but if you have some patience you can find some decent ones.

yeh, aaronv2's thing looked great. even tho everything you just said made 0% meaning to me (okay...maybe the word "spray paint")

that was pretty good, good story and stuff, yet, it feels like it was unfinnished, like they just figured out wats been happening and it just finnishes. some of the lines and acting were a bit corny, and some frames went on just a tiny bit too long. but over-all i liked it. Uugh,i hate criticizing o...

wicked, its starting to take shape and looks really good. CLEARLY improved since the first one
by the way, wat is it for? is it for a movie or just for fun?

i mostly do story boards and that stuff all on paper with drawings, also when an idea pops into my head i scribble it down in a note-book or something cos i'm afraid ill forget about it later. except once ive figured out most of the script i write it on computer so i can print it, plus its ten times...

i dont really know anything about creating emotions with the audience and stuff, but i think you should have a sad one but not TOTALLY depressing,yeh i agree with whoever said it, make it so its an uncompleted ending or whatever, so it leaves the audience thinking and that. but not TOTALLY uncomplet...

i dunno, he's a freak? by the way you dont have to worry about it anymore cos i decided to change it so he doesnt talk back to the voice. cos i filmed the first scene and then in editing it was all cr**. so now i think i'm gonna have it that whenever he sees his brother he gets numerous screaming vo...

Uhh... (yeh same i hope this doesnt start that s*** again) but rhys, you saying that wat he said wasnt nice and he should keep it to himself is just plain funny. i mean remember when you said stuff like-"in case you havent noticed we all want you drowned in a bathtub of ice" ? P.S i dont k...

yeh, i no its basic. it was my first try at doing the ends of the roof and windows and doors, plus i did it in about 10 min. i also made my nanas house but it sorta turned out cr**. i'm planning on making my own house but doing the measurements right and everything. P.S yeh i know wat your thinking ...

rhys: if you actually stop and think about things you can understand them. i said pour sand on the grass OR soak it with water, as to not turn your backyard into a blazing bonfire :) and also you said you'd wait until you got a good 3d program, yet i specifically remember you saying you were too laz...

hey, i made a house!
http://s53.photobucket.com/albums/g60/z ... =house.png

kool, i downloaded it and did the tutorials. but i'm still getting the hang of it, so far i can only build basic rectangles and stuff.

i agree with mr.anderson. you should have the screen white out, then zoom out from your title, and the titles font is white, if you get what i mean.

no, not a shot of the trampoline. the shot BEFORE it. after you stab her, your still bent down with watever you stabbed her with at her stomach and then suddenly your running at the trampoline. you should have had a shot of you bending back up then run off screen.

cr**, i thought it was all CGI, but now that i look at it closer, yeh the trees and stuff are real,
lol, yeh, the trees do look fake somehow.

kool, that looks really good. what is it might i ask? like the intro or wat? yeh the glow looks funny. also wats an art film?(yeh i know, your goin to go on about how freakin dumb i am for not knowing this. but tell me any way, is it just like an animation movie or wat?) P.S SHUT UP! i can see you l...

HA,HA,HA! joking chill. it looked real funny at the start where your walking down being all serious and then your dog walks down the path, it also walks past when your on the trampoline, i'd recommend tying her up or something. yeh, also some of the cuts looked really far apart (especially the one w...